Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support
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Before discussing about this issue, we should talk about what kind of system the country has. Because each country has it\'s values and people have agreed with their system whether they like it or not. In the point of democratic countries, support to old people is not country\'s responsibility. Every citizen have to save money for their future and there are ways to make pensions in the country\'s system. We have a national pension system which is mandatory for people to join, so people are guaranteed to get it when they reached certain ages by the government. In other hand, it is taken for granted to provide financial support by the government in a socialist state. Each system has an advantage and disadvantage, so few countries has implemented a mixed system that takes advantages from two major systems. I believe that some people need to be supported form their country because they can\'t make money by themselves in various reasons. Each person has a different story in their lives.
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Before discussing about this issue, we should talk about what kind of system the country has.
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Because each country has it\'s values and people have agreed with their system whether they like it or not.
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In the point of democratic countries, giving support to old people is not the country\'s responsibility.
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Every citizen has to save money for their future and there are ways to make pensions in the country\'s system.
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We have a national pension system which is mandatory for people to join, so people are guaranteed to get it when they reached certain ages from the government.
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On the other hand, it is taken for granted to provide financial support by the government in a socialist state.
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Each system has an advantage and disadvantage, so a few countries have implemented a mixed system that takes advantages from two major systems.
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I believe that some people need to be supported form their country because they can\'t make money by themselves in various reasons.
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Each person has a different story in their lives.
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