Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case?

2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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There are a lot of reasons that some people who fail in school have successful life. Although they have outstanding abilities, they may have some problems that not getting along well with people or preferring to study alone rather than together. I think that is personal problem and you don’t need to engage in no matter how they live because everybody have individual characteristic and they choose their way. The most important thing to succeed in life is to have on your values which can help you to deal with difficulties when you meet hurdle in your life. The values should be giving thankful and advices and sometimes it would be lighthouse[등대] that console me. Therefore I always try to encourage myself and hypnotize that I will have successful life at the end of my lives. I'm sure that It will lead me into a marvelous person.

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There are a lot of reasons that some people who fail in school have successful life.
>>There are a lot of reasons when some people who fail in school have successful life.
Although they have outstanding abilities, they may have some problems that not getting along well with people or preferring to study alone rather than together.
>>Correct.
I think that is personal problem and you don’t need to engage in no matter how they live because everybody have individual characteristic and they choose their way.
>>Correct.
The most important thing to succeed in life is to have on your values which can help you to deal with difficulties when you meet hurdle in your life.
>>Correct.

>>OR:  The most important thing to succeed in life is to have on your values which can help you to deal with difficulties when you meet hindrances in life.
 The values should be giving thankful and advices and sometimes it would be lighthouse[등대] that console me.
>>We should be thankful for values and advices and sometimes it would be a lighthouse that consoles me.
Therefore I always try to encourage myself and hypnotize that I will have successful life at the end of my lives.
I\'m sure that It will lead me into a marvelous person.

>>Correct.

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