Some people have suggested that helping needy people is an important part of being a good citizen. D
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ye [이름],
Your perspective on helping needy people as an important aspect of being a good citizen is quite insightful. You raise the important point that the ability to help is relative and should not negatively affect your own life. Sharing what you have is a way to prevent widespread poverty and social problems caused by extreme wealth gaps. Your reminder that circumstances can change, and we might also need help someday is a valuable insight.
~Teacher Cathy
Some agree.
>>Some people agree.
Am I in a position to help the poor?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Do I have the ability to support those in need?
I think this part is important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I believe this part is crucial.
This position is relative, but it should not interfere with my life when I share what I have with someone else.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The matter of this position is relative, but it shouldn\'t disrupt my life when I choose to share what I have with someone else.
Otherwise, everyone will be poor.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Otherwise, poverty will affect everyone.
If I am in a position to help, it is important to help the poor.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Helping the poor is crucial if I have the means to do so.
The world lives together.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The world is united.
The gap between rich and poor will eventually lead to rebellion, and unilateral accumulation of wealth will eventually become a problem for society.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The disparity between the wealthy and the less fortunate can result in uprisings, and the unchecked accumulation of riches can pose a societal issue over time.
Therefore, it is important to help the poor.
>>CORRECT
OR>>That\'s why helping poor people is very important.
Even if I have everything now, don\'t forget that someday I may become a poor and needy person.
>>CORRECT
OR>>While I currently possess everything, it\'s important to remember that I might experience times of poverty and need in the future.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.