Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others lik
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I really love living in Korea that has 4 seasons in a year. However, I have a problem to adapt new temperature because I have a rhinitis. I always feel itchy whenever the season changes. I haven\'t had any symptom regarding my disease while I was in the UAE. It is because of the weather that doesn\'t change all the time. Furthermore, I really love playing under the hot weather. There are a lot of things to do in the summer season like swimming, surfing and so on. On the contrary, I hate winter season. I can\'t stand the cold weather. I really hate going out in the winter season. However, there still things I can do in cold weather such as ski and snow board. But there is nothing to do for me except the activities that I mentioned before. Ordinary people like spring and autumn because it is good for picnic. But these seasons are being shorter than before that is related with weather change around the world. Actually, I like both but if I have to choose one thing, I would rather choosing sa
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I really love living in Korea that has 4 seasons in a year.
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However, I have a problem to adapt new temperature because I have a rhinitis.
>>> However, I have a problem adapting the new temperature because I have a rhinitis.
I always feel itchy whenever the season changes.
>>> CORRECT
I haven\'t had any symptom regarding my disease while I was in the UAE.
>>> CORRECT
It is because of the weather that doesn\'t change all the time.
>>> CORRECT
Furthermore, I really love playing under the hot weather.
>>> CORRECT
There are a lot of things to do in summer season like swimming, surfing and so on.
>>> CORRECT
On the contrary, I hate winter season.
>>> CORRECT
I can\'t stand the cold weather.
>>> CORRECT
I really hate going out in winter season.
>>> CORRECT
However, there are still things I can do in cold weather such as skiing and snow boarding.
>>> CORRECT
But there is nothing to do for me except the activities that I mentioned earlier.
>>> CORRECT
Ordinary people like spring and autumn because it is good to go for a picnic.
>>> CORRECT
But these seasons are being shorter than before that is related with climate change around the world.
>>> CORRECT
Actually, I like both but if I have to choose one thing, I would rather choose...
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