Some people prefer to travel alone while others like to travel in group. Which do you prefer and why
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I never had going on a trip alone. Because to travel alone as a girl can be dangerous and I don't have courage to travel alone. I have gone on a tirp through tour maneger and i have gone on a trip with my friends and family. If i will go on a trip, i don't want to use tour manager. I would go on a trip with a person who have a same preference. When i use tour manager, i have to move together who i don't know before and have to do what i don't want to do. Trip hour is limited, so i must use my time efficiently and meaningly. But sometime in group tour, i feel that my time is spent without my preference. So i want to go on a trip with someone who fit me well.
Also i really want to have a chance to travel alone at beautiful city. When i will have a ability and courage to travel alone, i will leave!
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for answering your homework^^
I agree with you! If I also have the courage and money to travel alone, I will also leave.
Anyway, let\'s talk more about this in our class.
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Chelsea
I never had going on a trip alone. Because to travel alone as a girl can be dangerous and I don\'t have courage to travel alone.
>> I have never gone on a trip alone. Because travelling alone as a girl can be dangerous and I don\'t have the courage to travel alone.
I have gone on a tirp through tour maneger and i have gone on a trip with my friends and family.
>> I have gone on a trip with a tour guide and I have gone on a trip with my friends and family.
If i will go on a trip, i don\'t want to use tour manager.
>> If I will go on a trip, I don\'t want to have a tour guide.
I would go on a trip with a person who have a same preference.
>> I would go on a trip with a person who has the same preference.
When i use tour manager, i have to move together who i don\'t know before and have to do what i don\'t want to do.
>> When I have a tour guide, we have to move together who I haven\'t met before and I have to do the thing I don\'t want to do.
Trip hour is limited, so i must use my time efficiently and meaningly.
>> Trip hour is limites so I must use my time efficiently and meaningly.
But sometime in group tour, i feel that my time is spent without my preference.
>> But sometimes, in a group tour, I feel that was spent without my preference.
So i want to go on a trip with someone who fit me well.
>> So I want to go on a trip with someon who matches me well.Also i really want to have a chance to travel alone at beautiful city.
>> Also, I really want to have a chance to travel alone in a beautiful city.
When i will have a ability and courage to travel alone, i will leave!
>> When I will have the ability and courage to travel alone. I will leave!
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