Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which do
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I would apply for a small company at first. If I should get employeed luckily there , I will work for 2 or 3 years to be more experienced at a small company. When I'm ready to change my job, I will apply for a large company. Because it offers workders good benefits such as high salary, wellfare and culture. Also, even though they feel stressed out from the workd, they feel proud of their comapny which has good reputation.
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I would apply for a small company at first.
>>>>I would apply to a small company first.
If I should get employeed luckily there , I will work for 2 or 3 years to be more experienced at a small company.
>>>>If I will be luckily employed there, then I will work for 2-3 years to gain experience in a small company.
Because it offers workders good benefits such as high salary, wellfare and culture.
>>>>Because it offers good benefits to workers such as high salary, welfare and culture.
Also, even though they feel stressed out from the workd, they feel proud of their comapny which has good reputation.
>>>>Also, even though they feel stressed out from their works, they would feel proud of their company which has a good reputation.
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