-Some people replace one addictive behavior with another. Can you think of an example?- (^-^)

2020-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Some people bite their fingernails habitually. In order to treat this habit, they can try to do nail art. 2. Some people who want to quit smoking typically chew gams or eat candies. 3. Some children suck their thumb. Though it is almost impossible that they care the habit by theirself, their parents attempt on various ways such as using some devices in their mouse or finger. 4. Some students watch their smartphone frequently when they are studying. Some of them change their smartphone for a just phone whose Internet network is not working.

강사 첨삭

Hi Genie! Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts as well. You did great! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

1. Some people bite their fingernails habitually. In order to treat this habit, they can try to do nail art.
>>CORRECT
2. Some people who want to quit smoking typically chew gams or eat candies.
>>CORRECT (*GUM)
3. Some children suck their thumb. 
>>CORRECT
Though it is almost impossible that they care the habit by theirself, their parents attempt on various ways such as using some devices in their mouse or finger.
>>Though it is almost impossible that they care about the habit themselves, their parents attempt on various ways such as putting some devices in their mouths or fingers.
4. Some students watch their smartphone frequently when they are studying. 
>>CORRECT OR
>>Some students look at their smartphones frequently when they are studying. 
Some of them change their smartphone for a just phone whose Internet network is not working.
>>Some of them exchanged their phones with an ordinary phone which internet is not working.

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