Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized
학생이 쓴 원문
After that day, you found it. Therefore , you should keep your items in the correct place in case of the situation
If you took my advice, you could save your money and time. Also, you could manage your products effectively and properly. Lastly, well-organized everything around make you feel stable and clam. It also help you concentrate on your work more easily than messy environment. Because of this, I always organize everything before I start to work. Although your home is your own place, your workplace is not only for you. So you should make sure to keep your table being kept tidy and clean.
In conclusion, with well-organized your workplace and home you could reduce potential risk or accident. Also, you could’t spend your money and waste your time to find something. In addition, you are able to keep your mind stablely.
- Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves./Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her- Explain how to apply for the job
강사 첨삭
Here\'s the continuation.
After that day, you found it. Therefore , you should keep your items in the correct place in case of the situation
>>After that day, you found it. Therefore, you should keep your items in the correct places in case of the situation.
If you took my advice, you could save your money and time. Also, you could manage your products effectively and properly. Lastly, well-organized everything around make you feel stable and clam.
>>If you took my advice, you could save your money and time. Also, you could manage your products effectively and properly. Lastly, well-organized everything around you makes you feel stable and calm.
It also help you concentrate on your work more easily than messy environment. Because of this, I always organize everything before I start to work.
>>It also helps you concentrate on your work more easily than a messy environment. Because of this, I always organize everything before I start to work.
Although your home is your own place, your workplace is not only for you. So you should make sure to keep your table being kept tidy and clean.
>>Although your home is your own place, your workplace is not only for you. So, you should make sure to keep your table tidy and clean.
In conclusion, with well-organized your workplace and home you could reduce potential risk or accident. Also, you could’t spend your money and waste your time to find something.
>>In conclusion, if you well-organized your workplace and home, you could reduce potential risks or accidents. Also, you couldn’t spend your money and waste your time to find something.
In addition, you are able to keep your mind stablely.
>>In addition, you are able to keep your mind stable.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.