: Some people say that because we can now watch films on our phones, there is no reason to go to the

2020-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I fell always sleepy whenever I go to the cinema due to the dark environment. I have even slept while I was watching very interesting movie. In personal, I don\'t want to spend money watching movie in the cinema because of the reason I mentioned above. However, I fully agree with the different quality between the cinema and the tablet. I don\'t think we can fully enjoy the movie with personal smart phones, tablets, and TV as well. Because the cinema has special facility to make a movie the best performance. I used to watch movies in the cinema when I was dating with my wife but every time, my wife was disappointed to me because of my habit at the theater. Even though, I always fall a sleep in the cinema, I like the sound and the environment of the cinema. And it inspire me old memory that I had time with various people in the cinema. I also like eating snacks there. I feel like it is more delicious to eat snacks and coke. I don\'t know why but we all know that food is more delicious out

강사 첨삭

Delightful day Mr. [이름]~! ^^ It\'s raining in my town now. It\'s so gloomy. Anyway, thanks for sharing lots of your ideas regarding your essays~! ^^ Great mind! Great writings!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA 
I fell always sleepy whenever I go to the cinema due to the dark atmosphere. 
>>> CORRECT
I have even slept while I was watching very interesting movie. 
>>> CORRECT
Personally, I don\'t want to spend money watching movie in the cinema because of the reason I mentioned above.
>>> CORRECT
 However, I fully agree with the different quality between the cinema and the tablet. 
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t think we can fully enjoy the movie with personal smart phones, tablets, and TV as well. 
>>> CORRECT
Because cinemas have special facilities to make a movie be the best in performance.
>>> CORRECT
 I used to watch movies in the cinema when I was dating with my wife but every time, my wife was disappointed to me because of my habit at the theater.
>>> CORRECT
Even though, I always fall a sleep in the cinema, I like the sound and the atmosphere of the cinema.
>>> CORRECT
 And it inspires me of old memory that I had with various people in the cinema.
>>> CORRECT
 I also like eating snacks there.
>>> CORRECT
 I feel like it is more delicious to eat snacks and coke.
>>> CORRECT
 I don\'t know why but we all know that food is more delicious outside.
>>> CORRECT

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