Some people say that humans are scarier than the most dangerous animals. Do you agree or disagree?
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I disagree because humans can use weapons and smart but the most dangerous animals is smart and strong.
If humans don\'t have weapons they can\'t win against the most dangerous animals.
So humans are weaker than the most dangerous animals.(^_^)
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Some people say that humans are scarier than the most dangerous animals. Do you agree or disagree?
I disagree because humans can use weapons and smart but the most dangerous animals is smart and strong.
>> I disagree because humans can use weapons and are smart, but the most dangerous animals are smart and strong.
If humans don\'t have weapons they can\'t win against the most dangerous animals.
>> If humans don\'t have weapons, they can\'t win against the most dangerous animals.
>> OR: Without weapons, humans can\'t defeat the most dangerous animals.
So humans are weaker than the most dangerous animals.(^_^)
>> CORRECT~~
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