Some people say that marriage is outdated (too old-fashioned and not needed), do you agree or disagr

Hi Sir [이름]!!

Some people don\'t want to get married anymore.

It is because they are scared to be divorced in the future.

In my case, I don\'t know if I will still believe in relationships that will last forever.

It is because I saw a lot of people around me who regret that they got married.

Anyway, we can talk more about this in class.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

Some are predicting that marriage will soon be a thing of the past—perhaps within a generation.

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>> OR: Some people are predicting that marriage will soon be a thing of the past;perhaps within a generation.

Fundamental shifts in today’s thinking are impacting society’s evaluation of this time-honored tradition.

>> Did you mean: Fundamental shifts in today’s thinking have an impact in society’s evaluation of this time-honored tradition.

Divorce rates are climbing in all of the countries.

>> Divorce rates are increasing  in all of the countries.

The number of broken homes is increasing.

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It is becoming increasingly rare to find couples who have been happily married for several decades.

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More couples in developing nations are unhappy because of the changing roles brought on by the “modern” lifestyle.

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Old and new cultures are clashing.

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Especially your generation think that marriage is no more a must, but it’s a matter of individual’s choice.

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Whether in marriages presently headed for divorce, little concern is given to those most affected children.

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We should not victimize our children for our own selfishness.

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As humans, we desire relationships.

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This is the best model to maintain and grow in relationships.

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Happy and healthy marriages have one of the greatest impacts on people’s lives.

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