Some people say that pooper societies have stronger values than rich counties.
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Dear [Name],
I think it is different according to what it mean the value. As you know, Korea was a poor country in the world. But we made a rich country now. The Value is
change by situation.
Sometimes, the poor is sronger than the rich. Because they have no loss anything. But it is impossible to change at once. In case of Korea, It took over 60 years to get a rich country.
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Hello [이름]! :)
Sometimes, the poor is sronger than the rich.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think it is different according to what it mean the value.
>> I think it is different according to what value means.
As you know, Korea was a poor country in the world.
>> As you know, Korea used to be a poor country.
But we made a rich country now.
>> But we managed to make it a rich country.
The Value is change by situation.
>> The value is changed by the situation.
Sometimes, the poor is sronger than the rich.
>> Sometimes, the poor is stronger than the rich.
Because they have no loss anything.
>> Because they have nothing to lose.
But it is impossible to change at once.
>> But it is impossible to change something overnight.
In case of Korea, It took over 60 years to get a rich country.
>> In the case of Korea, It took over 60 years to make it a rich country.
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