Some people say that the only people who need privacy are doing something illegal. Do you agree or d
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. Installing cams in both private and public places has always been an topic of debate. Some argue it can ensure public safety but some also argue that it is an invasion of privacy.
- T. Beth
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I disagree with some people say that the only people who need privacy are doing something illegal.
>>> I disagree with what some people say that the only people who need privacy are doing something illegal.
For example, Some people are using it illegally.
>>> correct (For example, some people are using it illegally.)
In the news, Installed spy cam in several hotels recorded visitors.
>>> correct (In the news, installed spy cams in several hotels recorded visitors.)
The recorded scenes are transmitting website and specific members are watching it individaul places.
>>> The recorded scenes are transmitted through the website and specific members are watching it in their individual places.
It is latest news about invading privacy.
>>> It is the latest news about invading privacy.
>>> OR: It is the latest news about the invasion of privacy.
Even though some cases this has been in the public interest, That will have a lot of problem like invading privacy in anywhere.
>>> Even though in some cases this has been a public interest, it will have a lot of problems like invading privacy anywhere.
And some kind of spy cam can be bought from the website easily.
>>> correct
If it is possible to check who is buying it by the legal, This accident`s rate will be dimished.
>>> If it is possible to check who is buying it legally, the rate of this incident wil decrease.
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