Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their li
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My parents moved out a lot, when I was young because of economic status. That was not happy experience to meet new friend at new school. I know that parents wanted to live in better place so they were looking for another place with less expensive rental fee. It it true that if the house is far from the downtown or a capital city, the house price is usually cheaper than downtown\'s one. However, our family was not enough to rent a nice house for living, we have moved out to the cheapest house every moment. For these reason, I really hate moving out to new house. My personality also don\'t like adapt a new environment. So, I would like to stay a place which I live now. I don\'t want to move other places. But if I have a chance to live a another country, I am willing to live there.
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Hi there Mr. [이름]. “Happiness is an attitude. We either make ourselves miserable, or happy and strong. The amount of work is the same.” Take care! See you!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
My parents moved out a lot, when I was young because of economic status.
>>> CORRECT
It was a sad experience to meet new friends at new school.
>>> CORRECT
I know that parents wanted to live in a better place so they were looking for another place with less expensive rental fees.
>>> CORRECT
It is true that if the house is far from the downtown or a capital city, the house price is usually cheaper than in downtown.
>>> CORRECT
However, our family didn\'t have enough money to rent a nice house for living, we moved out finding the cheapest house every moment.
>>> CORRECT
For these reason, I really hate moving out to a new house.
>>> CORRECT
My personality also don\'t like adapt a new environment.
>>> My personality couldn\'t adapt to a new environment easily.
So, I would like to stay a place which I live now.
>>> So, I would like to stay in the place where I live now.
I don\'t want to move to other places.
>>> CORRECT
But if I have a chance to live in another country, I will be willing to live there.
>>> CORRECT
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