Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put
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I think all prisoners should not be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
Because there are various prisoners. If all prisoners are made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars, the society will be confused.
So, I think it should be divided according to the size of the crime.
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I think all prisoners should not be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
>> Correct
Because there are various prisoners.
Because there are various prisoners.
>> This is because there are various kinds of prisoners.
If all prisoners are made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars, the society will be confused.
>> Correct
So, I think it should be divided according to the size of the crime.
So, I think it should be divided according to the size of the crime.
>> So, I think it should depend on the gravity of the crime.
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