Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while other think that life in h
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You did a great job with this homework, but I want you to notice that you use the article \"The\" most of the time in a sentence. See you tomorrow :)
Teacher Travis.
I have been thinking that is depend on the situations and options that you can choose.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I\'ve been thinking that it will depend on the situations and options that you can choose.
In the case of the city, The purpose of the parents who want to live with their children in the city is the high quality educations.
>>in the case of city, the purpose of the parents is to have a high quality of education.
It is the most important factor to choose the city and apartment.
>>It is the most important factor to choose city and to live in an apartment.
even the higher educational environment leads to the housing price.
>>Even higher education environment leads to housing price.
So there are so many house-poor who can’t afford it but want to admire to live around such a high-education city.
>>There are so many poor people that can\'t afford it but want to admire to live around such as a high education in the city.
On the other hand, children who live in the countryside can learn eco-friendly things rather than modern knowledges.
>>Correct.
but it is hard to reach the city if they want to take the class to acquire more than studying at school.
>>Correct.
Also despite of developing online web-site and materials to study those who are living with family members that are not interested in education would not to used to utilize it efficiently.
>>Correct.
These are the main advantages and disadvantages of both places.
>>Those are the main advantages and disadvantages of both places.
you have to choose the place belong which values to take.
>>Correct.
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