Some people think it’s a good idea to wear a uniform at work.
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I think it is necessary to wear a uniform at work depending on the business type and department of the company.
If we wear a uniform, we can feel the belonging of the company and don\'t need to be nervous for our clothes.
It is essential to wear an antistatic uniform in electronic company.
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Good afternoon Ms. [Name]~!^^ Thanks for having an impressive understanding and depth of knowledge about your interests in writing topics.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think it is necessary to wear a uniform at work depending on the business type and department of the company.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
If we wear a uniform, we can feel the belonging of the company and don\'t need to be nervous for our clothes.
If we wear a uniform, we can feel the belonging of the company and don\'t need to be nervous for our clothes.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> If we wear a uniform, we can feel a sense of belonging to the company and don\'t need to be [conscious] for our clothes.
It is essential to wear an antistatic uniform in electronic company.
It is essential to wear an antistatic uniform in electronic company.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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