Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that t
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As part of the efforts that government has done to keep our environment clean, companies and individuals must pay money like taxes. It will reduce waste that pollute our environment. Eco-friendly and new renewable energy is the main interested topic these days. There are a lot of new companies of this business which have just started. The president-elect in the USA are interested in a new renewable energy businesses and had told that he would invest a lot in these businesses. Pollution taxes were already imposed to the industrial areas and each company should install proper facility that can handle polluted materials. In addition, personnel need to pay more attention to keep our environment because people use extremely high number of plastics everyday that are major material to mess our world. Recycle can be the first step we can do and try not to use a disposable products.
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Hi Mr. [이름]~! ^^ How\'s your week going? :) Anyway, thanks a lot for your doing your essay. You\'ve got commendable ideas these days! Keep writing!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
As part of the efforts that government has done to keep our environment clean, companies and individuals must pay money like taxes.
>>> CORRECT
It will reduce waste that pollute our environment.
>>> It will reduce the waste pollution in the environment.
Eco-friendly and new renewable energy are the main interested topics these days.
>>> CORRECT
There are a lot of new companies of this business which have just started.
>>> CORRECT
The president-elect in the USA are interested in a new renewable energy businesses and had told that he would invest a lot in these businesses.
>>> CORRECT
Pollution taxes were already imposed to the industrial areas and each company should install proper facility that can handle polluted materials.
>>> CORRECT
In addition, the personnel need to pay more attention to keep our environment because people use extremely high number of plastics everyday that are major material to mess our world.
>>> CORRECT
Recycle can be the first step we can do and try not to use disposable products.
>>> CORRECT
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