Some people think that e-books are the death of paper book while other think that paper books will n
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There are many contents and e-book readers like “kindle” regarding e-books.
It is convenient to read a book while commuting to somewhere.
Also, you just take care of e-book readers or smart phones to be able to read.
As developing the e-book field, function of the e-book reader is also getting better than before. you feels like reading real book through the reader.
you can control monitor’s color, font and even size to express the paper book.
I tend to be sensitive on fatigue of my eyes.
So I had been preferring to read paper books before I met the-state-art e-book reader. but that was so light and comfortable.
On the other hand, most of the books are heavy and big to read on my hands except mini sized paper book.
There is a bit problem like that though paper books have charming points such as their own smells.
Modern people prefer having analog ways despite of developing the most convenient technical parts. and they are still enjoying paper books at cafe and sun bed these days.
Because there are the various reasons that people love to read paper books, paper books are not disappeared by e-book.
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Hello [이름]!
I got you points, and I like it. There are just some thoughts that I want you to focus on.
Teacher Travis.
There are many contents and e-book readers like “kindle” regarding e-books.
>>(I\'m not sure about the usage of \"content\")
>>There are many kinds of e-books like \"Kindle\".
It is convenient to read a book while commuting to somewhere.
>>Correct.
>>E-book is convenient to read while having travel to somewhere.
Also, you just take care of e-book readers or smart phones to be able to read.
>>(What do you mean about take care of e-book reader?) What is means to me you are referring to a person who read e-books.
>>E-book reader -- a person who read e-book.
>>Also , you just have to save the e-book to your smart phone and read it any where.
As developing the e-book field, function of the e-book reader is also getting better than before. you feels like reading real book through the reader.
>>As e-book field is developing, e-books reader is getting better than before. It feels like you\'re reading a real book.
>>\"through the reader\" - Probably you are referring to author.
you can control monitor’s color, font and even size to express the paper book.
>>Correct.
I tend to be sensitive on fatigue of my eyes.
>>I tend to be sensitive about the fatigue of my eyes.
So I had been preferring to read paper books before I met the-state-art e-book reader. but that was so light and comfortable.
>>Correct.
On the other hand, most of the books are heavy and big to read on my hands except mini sized paper book.
>>Correct.
There is a bit problem like that though paper books have charming points such as their own smells.
>>There is a bit problem of paper books having is charming smells.
>> (There is a contradiction with your statement, \"a bot problem\" and \"charming\").
Modern people prefer having analog ways despite of developing the most convenient technical parts. and they are still enjoying paper books at cafe and sun bed these days.
>>Correct.
Because there are the various reasons that people love to read paper books, paper books are not disappeared by e-book>>Correct
>>(I\'m not sure about the usage of \"content\")
>>There are many kinds of e-books like \"Kindle\".
It is convenient to read a book while commuting to somewhere.
>>Correct.
>>E-book is convenient to read while having travel to somewhere.
Also, you just take care of e-book readers or smart phones to be able to read.
>>(What do you mean about take care of e-book reader?) What is means to me you are referring to a person who read e-books.
>>E-book reader -- a person who read e-book.
>>Also , you just have to save the e-book to your smart phone and read it any where.
As developing the e-book field, function of the e-book reader is also getting better than before. you feels like reading real book through the reader.
>>As e-book field is developing, e-books reader is getting better than before. It feels like you\'re reading a real book.
>>\"through the reader\" - Probably you are referring to author.
you can control monitor’s color, font and even size to express the paper book.
>>Correct.
I tend to be sensitive on fatigue of my eyes.
>>I tend to be sensitive about the fatigue of my eyes.
So I had been preferring to read paper books before I met the-state-art e-book reader. but that was so light and comfortable.
>>Correct.
On the other hand, most of the books are heavy and big to read on my hands except mini sized paper book.
>>Correct.
There is a bit problem like that though paper books have charming points such as their own smells.
>>There is a bit problem of paper books having is charming smells.
>> (There is a contradiction with your statement, \"a bot problem\" and \"charming\").
Modern people prefer having analog ways despite of developing the most convenient technical parts. and they are still enjoying paper books at cafe and sun bed these days.
>>Correct.
Because there are the various reasons that people love to read paper books, paper books are not disappeared by e-book>>Correct
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