Some people think that facing challenges improves a person. Do you agree or disagree?
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Hello [이름]! I hope you\'re having a good day. I think that it depends on the person on how he/she will deal with the challenge. Challenges can either make us or break us. ~~T.Dee
Sometimes, facing challenge is good for improving a person, here, most important factor is how hard it is.
>>Sometimes, facing a challenge is good for a person\'s improvement. The most important factor here, is how hard it is.
If someone faces challenge too much, he/she will quit easily, or moderate challenge makes him/her stronger.
>>If someone faces challenges too much, he/she will quit easily but a moderate challenge makes him/her stronger.
It will be fine that try to do new things.
>>It will also be fine to try to do new things.
Actually, I am for side.
>>Actually, I am for both sides.
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