Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as n
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I think the literature is the best way to study a language and it is good to extend our vocabulary. We can also learn how to express our opinion with refined expression. Reading a book has uncountable benefit from getting knowledge to having fun. Teachers and parents stress the importance of reading but children are not usually interested in it. Most parents purchase various books for children and try to read it for their children but It is not easy to read a book everyday for their babies because adults usually feel tired when they get home from the work. If parents would like their children to have interests on books, parents must put more efforts than children. The importance of books cannot be emphasized enough. Many professionals, people who are succeed and teachers always stress the importance of it. I like reading any kind of books and I think that there aren\'t unhelpful books, even comic books. Reading Book is always right way to improve ourselves.
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Hi there Mr. [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for your opinion about the essays I give you. I noticed that most of your sentences are becoming perfect! Keep expressing your mind~! ^^ Have a good time!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
>>> I think literature is the best way to study a language and it is good to extend our vocabulary.
>>> CORRECT
We can also learn how to express our opinion with refined expressions.
>>> CORRECT
Reading a book has uncountable benefits from getting knowledge to having fun.
>>> CORRECT
Teachers and parents stress the importance of reading but children are not usually interested in it.
>>> CORRECT
Most parents purchase various books for children and try to read it for their children but it is not easy to read a book every day for their babies because adults usually feel tired when they get home from work.
>>> CORRECT
If parents would like their children to have interests on books, parents must put more efforts than children.
>>> CORRECT
The importance of books cannot be emphasized enough.
>>> CORRECT
Many professionals, people who have succeeded and teachers always stress the importance of it.
>>> CORRECT
I like reading any kind of books and I think that there aren\'t unhelpful books, even comic books.
>>> CORRECT
Reading book is always the right way to improve ourselves.
>>> CORRECT
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