Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, howe
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Parents can teach their children how to be good members of society. And, the school also can teach stedents how to be good members of society. I think paternts is better than the school\'s teaching.
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Hi [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for your ideas! Keep it up! I appreciate that you work independently and takes pride in work well done.
Have a good one~!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Parents can teach their children how to be good members of society.
>>> CORRECT
And, the school also can teach students how to be good members of society.
>>> CORRECT
I think parents is better than the school\'s teaching.
>>> I think parents\' teaching is better than the school\'s.
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