Some people think that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences.To what extent do y

2018-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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i totally agree . When i drive, All of my family told me.Why don't you drive to fast? I have driven for 30 but my daughter have driven for 8 months. Oops,We went on a trip last summer vacation. My daughter laughed about i was not good at driving. But i always think to keep the traffic signal. Traffic offences cause to ruins happy families. So we have to take a strong punishment.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing your opinions Miss. [Name]!

I greatly appreciate it.

Anyway, here are some things that I want you to remember.


1. You must always capitalize the pronoun I.

2. Always start a sentence with an uppercase alphabet and avoid capitalizing the beginning of words in mid-sentence unless they are proper nouns.

3. Remember to include all necessary punctuation marks in your sentences.


I hope you keep these in mind Ma\'am. See you later. ^^,


~Teacher Shanee^^,


i totally agree . 

>>> I totally agree.

When i drive, All of my family told me. Why don\'t you drive to fast? I have driven for 30 but my daughter have driven for 8 months.

>>> When Id rive, my entire family told me, \"Why don\'t you drive so fast?\" I have driven for 30 years and my daughter has driven for only 8 months.

Oops,We went on a trip last summer vacation.                      

>>> And oh, we went on a trip last summer vacation.

My daughter laughed about i was not good at driving.               

>>> That time, my daughter laughed about how bad I was at driving.

But i always think to keep the traffic signal. 

>>> But I always think to follow the traffic signal.           

Traffic offences cause to ruins happy families.

>>> Traffic violations / offences can result to accidents that may shatter happy families.

So we have to take a strong punishment.

>>> That\'s why, I think we should impose a strong punishment so road safety will be improved.

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