Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living o

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I think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country for these reasons.

>>> Correct!
 First, It is nessasary for them to be accustomed to understand theirs culture.

>>> First, it is necessary for them to be accustomed to understand their culture.

For example, If you learn korean, You can`t adapt conversation with older person in using honorific words.

>>> For example, if you learn Korea, you have to learn the honorific system in the country.

If you are not using honorific words, most of koreans think you are so rude. 

>>> If you are talking to older people, you have to use specific honorifics. If not, you will be regarded as a rude person.
Second, It is best way to be bilingual by making foreigners.

>>> Second, the best way to be bilingual is to speak with foreigners.
I just think that many people are recommending join a club and making a freinds in the korea.

>>> I just think that many people are recommending joining a club and making foreign friends in Korea.

but it is not enough for me.

>>> But it is not enough for me.

incase of me, I usually finish work at 8:00 PM. when I come back home, I`m exhausted all days.

>>> In my case, I usually finish work at 8:00 am. When I come back home, I\'m already exhausted.

By these reason I recommend others to leave korea.

>>> For these reasons, I recommend to other people to study a language in another country.