Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why i
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The first thing people do is opening the website and ask what they would like to know when they have problem since the internet invented. Google is the most preferable search engine people have used because it provide a lot of information and various opinions from many professionals. People, especially, prefer to check their medical problem through internet website because it is easy to access and fast way to solve their problems. However, it can be dangerous solution because people don\'t want to visit hospital due to the wrong informations from the websites. There are a lot of right and accurate informations but non professionals have wrote their personal opinions or informations based on their previous experience. In addition, most people would like to get confirmation that their symptom would be light disease. So, they spend huge time to find the solutions that they want to hear from the doctors. These movement would be result on the serious problem and harm for people\'s health.
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The first thing people do is opening the website and ask what they would like to know when they have problem since the internet was invented.
>>> CORRECT
Google is the most preferable search engine people have used because it provides a lot of information and various opinions from many professionals.
>>> CORRECT
People, especially, prefer to check their medical problem through internet websites because it is easy to access and fast way to solve their problems.
>>> People, especially, prefer to check their medical problem through internet websites because it is easy to access and it\'s the fastest way to solve their problems.
However, it can be dangerous solution because people don\'t want to visit hospital due to the wrong informations from the websites.
>>> However, it can be a dangerous solution because people don\'t want to visit the hospital due to the wrong information from the websites.
There are a lot of right and accurate informations but non professionals have wrote their personal opinions or informations based on their previous experience.
>>> There are a lot of right and accurate information but non-professionals have written their personal opinions or information based on their previous experience.
In addition, most people would like to get confirmation that their symptom would be light disease.
>>> CORRECT
So, they spend huge time to find the solutions that they want to hear from the doctors.
>>> So, they spend a long time to find the solutions that they want to hear from the doctors.
These movement would be result on the serious problem and harm for people\'s health.
>>> These movements would be a result on the serious problem and harmful for people\'s health.
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