Some people try to hold on to their youth with exercise, surgery, or medication. How do you feel abo

Hello Sir [이름]!

Yes, many of us really want to hold on to our youth, but we can\'t bring it back anymore because life keeps moving forward. This is impressive, keep on writing!

~Teacher Eunice

Nobody want to close to the death, people feel sad when they find that their appearance looks old.

>>> Nobody wants to be close to death, people feel sad when they find that their appearance looks old.

>>> OR: Nobody wants to be close to death, people feel anxious when they are starting to age.  

I would like to be an adult quickly when I was young, because there was a lot of limitation if I wanted to do something.
>>> Correct!  

I thought that I would get enough money and then I could buy anything I would like to buy. But I have been facing a different problem.

>>> I thought that I would get enough money, and then I could buy anything I would like to buy, but I have been facing a different problem.

I realized that the life is the things that overcome any events we have experienced. 

>>> I realized that life is all about overcoming any events that we have experienced.  

I hate getting older now, holing on to one\'s youth is the general desire when we are old.

>>> I hate getting older now, holding on to one\'s youth is the general desire when we are old.

We would like to be looked young until we die. 

>>>  We would like to look young until we die. 

However, I don\'t like using medication and getting surgery in order to stop getting old.

>>> Correct!  

It can make an another complication. 

>>> It can cause complications. 

If people want to hold on their youth, I want them to do exercise.

>>> If people want to hold on to their youth, I want them to do exercise.