some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer?

2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Risa

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I perfer to complain in writing. Thesedays, almost everyone uses internet to get some detailed information on product which they want to buy. By that reason, Complanining in writig can be more powerful rather than in person. If there is some bad comments on some product, customer may not buy the product due to a bad comments. and that is ture.so, company is very senstive about having a good review from customer, and they do many things like a marketing promotion to get good review. Also, a news can be spred rapidly on the internet especilly.If a custmer write some bad comment on product, the comment is spreded very fast to every person by internet. so, internet is very powerful method to share some info and konwlege for everyone.In summary, considering on fuction of internet,I perfer to complain in writing.

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Sir Daniel, Happy Monday! :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic. I like how you presented your ideas in the composition; very cohesive and coherent. You just have to be careful with how you spell the words, cool? Keep this up!   See you in class. :)   Cheers, [이름]     I perfer to complain in writing. >>I prefer to complain in writing. Thesedays, almost everyone uses internet to get some detailed information on product which they want to buy. >>These days, almost everyone uses the internet to get detailed information of the products which they want to buy. >>These days, almost everyone uses the internet to get some informationn of the products they want to buy. By that reason, Complanining in writig can be more powerful rather than in person. >>With this reason, complaining in writing can be more powerful than complaining in person. >>With this reason, writing complaints can be more powerful than complaining in person. If there is some bad comments on some product, customer may not buy the product due to a bad comments. >>If there are some bad comments about a product, customers may not buy the product due to bad publicity. >>If there are negative comments about a product, customers may not but the product due to bad publicity. and that is ture. >>And there is truth to that. so, company is very senstive about having a good review from customer, and they do many things like a marketing promotion to get good review. *** >>So companies are very sensitive about reviews of customers and they do many things to market products to get good reviews. Also, a news can be spred rapidly on the internet especilly. *** >>Also, news can be rapidly spread especially on the internet. >>***So companies are very sensitive about reviews of customers. They do many things to market products to get good reviews especially now that news can rapidly spread on the internet. If a custmer write some bad comment on product, the comment is spreded very fast to every person by internet. >>If a customer writes bad comments abot a product, the comment is spread very fast to every person through the internet. >>If a customer complains about a product, the commen is spread very fast to every person who has access to the internet. so, internet is very powerful method to share some info and konwlege for everyone. >>The internet is a very powerful method to share some info and knowledge to everyone. >>The internet is a very powerful tool to share information and knowledge to everyone. In summary, considering on fuction of internet,I perfer to complain in writing. >>In summary, considering the function of the internet, I prefer to complain in writing.

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