Some think that teenagers should follow older people’s rules. Others thinks that it is natural for t
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Old people always think that they are better than younger people. They consider young people as a people who need to be taught from them. However, adults were living in different environment with young generations. So, the way to live have been changed a lot since adults were young. My parents also would like to discipline me with their way but I sometimes refused their advice because we had a different thought. The one of the serious issues between parents and their children is how to take care of their babies. This is the major conflict between a mother and her daughter. I can\'t say that young people are always right and there are a lot of advice from adults which will help young people. But most adults in Korea as I have seen are conservative for everything and they become stubborn when it comes to the children\'s matters. The environments has been changing continuously, both group should try to understand why we have a different ideas that would be the results of differences of e
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Old people always think that they are better than younger people.
OR:>>>> Old people always think that they are better than the younger ones.
They consider young people as a people who need to be taught from them.
>>> They consider young people as ones who need to be taught from them.
However, adults are living in different environment with young generations.
>>> CORRECT
So, the way to live have been changed a lot since adults were young.
>>> So, the way we live has been changed a lot since adults were young.
My parents also would like to discipline me with their way but I sometimes refused their advice because we had different thoughts.
>>> CORRECT
One of the serious issues between parents and their children is how to take care of their babies.
>>> CORRECT
This is the major conflict between a mother and her daughter.
>>> CORRECT
I can\'t say that young people are always right and there are a lot of advice from adults which will help them.
>>> CORRECT
But most adults in Korea as I have seen are conservative for everything and they become stubborn when it comes to their children\'s matters.
>>> CORRECT
The environment has been changing continuously, both groups should try to understand why we have different ideas that would be the results of differences of...
>>> CORRECT
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