some troubles in married life..
학생이 쓴 원문
I've been married since 3years ago. As you know, marriage mean to start difficult life for women in terms of many aspects in Korea. Because korea is really sexist society. There are some representative problems most women have with my small tips to make ur marriage life more easily.
First, the relationship with parents in law. Our parents are totally differnet people from our generation like aliens. Therefore consider them as a person who is from the space. Don try to understand their thinking. Just listen to them and forget it. Try to understand your husbund. He is always piggy in the middle..
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Good morning!!! You have here a very interesting composition. Dealing with the in � laws is really hard I think. Thanks for your advice. ^^ Anyways, regarding your composition, most of your sentences are good though some of the words were mispelled but it's okay. It is also good to see that you actually tried to apply the Idioms that I am giving you each day. I commend you for that. Just keep on practicing and soon you'll perfect the language. See you later!!!
Lei J
I've been married since 3years ago.
>>correct
>>I've been married for 3 years (better)
As you know, marriage means to start a difficult life for women in terms of many aspects in Korea. >>correct
Because korea is really a sexist society.
>>correct
There are some representative problems most women have with my small tips to make your marriage life easier>>correct
First, the relationship with parents in law.
>>correct
Our parents are totally different people from our generation like aliens.
>>correct
Therefore consider them as a person who is from the outer space.
>>correct
Don뭪 try to understand their thinking.
>>Don't try too hard to understand what they are thinking
Just listen to them and forget it.
>>correct
Try to understand your husband.
>>correct
He is always the piggy in the middle..>>correct
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