some voca
학생이 쓴 원문
cowered : my dog abandoned before was adopted by my family. So at first time when he came home he cowered under bed or sofa. But now he became to have confidence and be active.
assassination : There is a movie title ‘Assassination’ in Korea.
asylum : Threr are some people who want to do political asylum in the world.
shortlisted : Korean actress Yoon yeo jung was shortlisted in Academy Film Festival in several years ago. And finally she won the prize.
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cowered : my dog abandoned before was adopted by my family. So at first time when he came home he cowered under bed or sofa. But now he became to have confidence and be active.
>> My family adopted an abandoned dog and when we brought him home for the first time, he cowered under the bed or sofa. But now, he gained confidence and became active.
assassination : There is a movie title ‘Assassination’ in Korea.
>> There is a movie titled ‘Assassination’ in Korea.
asylum : Threr are some people who want to do political asylum in the world.
>> There are some people in the world who want to seek political asylum.
shortlisted : Korean actress Yoon yeo jung was shortlisted in Academy Film Festival in several years ago. And finally she won the prize.
>> Korean actress Yoon Yeo Jung was shortlisted for the Academy Awards several years ago and ultimately won the prize.
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