Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports.

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\"Too much is as bad as too little\", I think this idiom explains all aspect of life.

>> \"Too much is as bad as too little.\" I think this idiom explains all aspects of life.

Practicing sports helps people to be healthy, strong, to burn fats, avoid health problems and diseases and built up friendship with others.

>> Practicing sports helps people to be healthy, strong, burn fats, avoid health problems and diseases, and build up friendship with others.

In addition, sports develop teamwork and leadership skills.

>> CORRECT!

However, if children spend a great amount of time practicing sports, they might be short of time to study other subjects.

>> However, if children spend a great amount of time practicing sports, they might have a short time to study other subjects.

As a result, they have not enough changes to get a jobs or enter good university.

>> As a result, they won\'t have enough changes to get jobs or enter good universities.

In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages for spending more time on sports.

>> In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages of spending more time on sports.

I think parents have to adjust practicing time for their children.

>> I think parents have to adjust their time for their children.