someday of rainy day.
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes we have sunken into certain idea for rainy day.
Almost of these ideas are like as memories, sadness, missing or fancy.
Even if these ideas wander around our head in ordinary day, we don't know that.
However if it's raining, we could know that because these idea pour down our head with a raindrop.
It's too natural, not special or strange.
Because everyone has loneliness in their mind and head, just we aren't usually conscious.
A feeling which follow these ideas may be negative emotion, but It is very important to us and necessary.
Because sometimes we realize that we are living from the feeling.
And it help us by feeling some catharsis.
Always remember that we are essentially lonely being and these idea help us by being relax.
강사 첨삭
I do feel especially nostalgic on a rainy day too. I usually feel that way when I\'m alone at home and has nothing else better to do. I trully enjoyed reading your idea about this. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. Have a wonderful weekend.
xoxoT. Camille
Sometimes we have sunken into certain idea for rainy day.
>>Sometimes we become nostalgic on a rainy day.Almost of these ideas are like as memories, sadness, missing or fancy.>>Most of these are about memories, sadness, missing someone or fancies.
Even if these ideas wander around our head in ordinary day, we don\'t know that. >>We don\'t know if we reminisce during an ordinary day. OR
>>It\'s not common for us to reminisce on an ordinary day.
However if it\'s raining, we could know that because these idea pour down our head with a raindrop.>>However if it\'s raining, we couldn\'t help but be nostalgic with every drop of rain.It\'s too natural, not special or strange.>>It\'s too natural. It\'s not special or strange.
Because everyone has loneliness in their mind and head, just we aren\'t usually conscious. >>Because everyone is lonely but we\'re usually not conscious.A feeling which follow these ideas may be negative emotion, but It is very important to us and necessary.>>The feeling we have after this may be a negative emotion, but it is very important to us and necessary.
Because sometimes we realize that we are living from the feeling.
>>Correct!And it help us by feeling some catharsis. >>The catharsis of our emotions helps us.Always remember that we are essentially lonely being and these idea help us by being relax.
>>Always remember that we are essentially lonely beings and reminiscing helps us relax.
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