someone I respect deeply (0511)
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many people who impressed me. I know them from books, news and meeting. Anyway I know them in one facet. I don't know their full life in detail. So my respect is ristrictive. I have no choice.
I want to tell about my father and mother.
Onetime I was disappointed from their weakness. But the more I live I admire them heartily! Through the troubled life I feel how difficult I keep the important thing in my mind. My father keep his wonder for the world until now. He thinks the true value among all belonging things. He knows and behave the importance of the share rather than economic achivement during busy life. My mother is so faithful consistently to everyone, everything and everytime. When I am tired or unsatisfied I think her. Although she was in so troubled period she always had faith and patience. The last important thing I want tell about is relaxative mind. I am lerning it now and will have to do.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you once again for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.
T. Gracelyn
>>correct
>>There are many people who impress me.
I know them from books, news and meeting.
>>correct
>>I\'ve known them through books, news and I met some of them.
Anyway, I know them in one facet.
>>Anyway, I know them by face.
I don\'t know their full life in detail.
>>correct
So my respect is ristrictive.
>>So my respect is also limited.
I have no choice.
>>correct
I want to tell about my father and mother.
I want to tell about my father and mother.
>>correct
One time I was disappointed from their weakness.
One time I was disappointed from their weakness.
>>One time, I was disappointed with their weaknesses.
But the more I live I admire them heartily!
>>correct
Through the troubled life I feel how difficult I keep the important thing in my mind.
>>I still keep the most important thing in my mind even though I\'m in trouble.
My father keep his wonder for the world until now.
>>My father is still amazed how beautiful the world is until now.
He thinks the true value among all belonging things.
>>He thinks about the true value of his belongings.
He knows and behave the importance of the share rather than economic achivement during busy life.
>>He knows the importance of sharing rather than being economical.
My mother is so faithful consistently to everyone, everything and everytime.
>>My mother is so faithful to everyone.
When I am tired or unsatisfied I think her.
>>When I am tired or unsatisfied, I think about her.
Although she was in so troubled period she always had faith and patience.
>>Although she is in trouble, she always has faith and patience.
The last important thing I want tell about is relaxative mind.
>>The last important thing I want to tell is about mind relaxation.
I am lerning it now and will have to do.
>>I am learning it now and will continue to do it.
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