Someone once said: 'For every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.' Do you agr
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Although I’m not familiar with the saying that “for every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness”, it will definitely affect our happiness if we get angry.
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If we get angry at someone or something, our brain and body will react accordingly.
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It’s much like the fight or fight response.
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Our body is gearing up for a fight to survive a wrong that’s been perpetrated against us.
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Chemicals like adrenaline will surge through our body.
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Although anger is a healthy emotional response that every human experiences, it must be dealt with in a healthy way, both physically and psychologically like other emotions.
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If handled improperly, it can lead to myriad problems that affect all aspects of our lives such as heart attacks, sleep disturbances, mood issues, and anxiety.
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An outburst of temper is unpleasant in the moment and dangerous to our health in the long run.
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However, it\'s not easy to control our temper and stay calm.
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It needs patience and also practicing meditation could help.
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