Someone told to keep it secret.
학생이 쓴 원문
Secret is keeping quiet.
Today I watched car racing.
It\'s a bit bored but it is worth watching.
Because I like car racing.
Today\'s weather is a bit cold.
Be careful not to catch a cold.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello Hyong [이름]! Thank you for practicing your writing and grammar skills. Keep it up! Have a great weekend and see you again on Monday.
Secret is keeping quiet.
>>>A secret should be kept.
Today I watched car racing.
>>> Today, I watched car racing.
It\'s a bit bored but it is worth watching.
It\'s a bit bored but it is worth watching.
>>> It\'s a bit boring, but it was worth watching.
Because I like car racing.
Because I like car racing.
>>>It\'s because I like car racing.
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