Something about my closest friend
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Seunghyo is one of my closest friends. I met him first when I was third grade and we became closer when it was second semester. He moved to Busan from Seoul when he was second grade. He is very nice and he has a good voice. Most of all he can play three kinds of games that I like such as Minecraft, Minecraft dungeons and Roblox. We play video games together at my home often.
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Seunghyo is one of my closest friends. I met him first when I was third
grade and we became closer when it was second semester. He moved to
Busan from Seoul when he was second grade. He is very nice and he has a
good voice. Most of all he can play three kinds of games that I like
such as Minecraft, Minecraft dungeons and Roblox. We play video games
together at my home often.
>> Seunghyo is one of my closest friends. I met him first when I was in third
grade and we became close when it was second semester. He moved to
Busan from Seoul when he was in second grade. He is very nice and he has a
good voice. Most of all he can also play the games that I like
such as Minecraft, Minecraft dungeons and Roblox. We play video games
together at my home often.
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