Something bad that happened to me.
학생이 쓴 원문
10 years ago, I used to work in a factory that factory produce machines for Semiconductor. Suddenly, previous boss said that we will develop a machine for LED. And then LED Machine Project was started. We didn\'t have enough technique to make that machine. So, we brought an engineer from Japan to ask teaching us. He was a good engineer. He taught us as much as he could. But, that time I had to learn new type of S/W and electric technique. I couldn\'t be sure about complete the project until half of the project period. I had worked 15 hours per day for 1 year. I couldn\'t take a rest even weekends. That time, my sun was under 1 year. My wife also suffered to raise up my son alone. Finally, I finished the project. I became a person who can control software and electric. I got high salary, but I quit the company to help my wife.
강사 첨삭
10 years ago, I used to work in a factory that factory produce machines for Semiconductor.
>>Ten years ago, I used to work in a factory that factory produces machines for semiconductors.
Suddenly, previous boss said that we will develop a machine for LED. And then LED Machine Project was started.
>> Suddenly, the previous boss said that we will develop a machine for LED. And then the LED Machine Project started.
We didn\'t have enough technique to make that machine. So, we brought an engineer from Japan to ask teaching us.
>>We didn\'t have enough technique to make that machine. So, we brought an engineer from Japan and ask him to teach us.
He was a good engineer. He taught us as much as he could. But, that time I had to learn new type of S/W and electric technique.
>>He was a good Engineer. He taught us as much as he could. But, at that time I had to learn a new type of S/W and electric technique.
I couldn\'t be sure about complete the project until half of the project period.
>>I couldn\'t be sure about the time the project gets completed until half of the project period.
I had worked 15 hours per day for 1 year. I couldn\'t take a rest even weekends.
>> I had worked 15 hours per day for 1 year. I couldn\'t take a rest even on weekends.
That time, my sun was under 1 year. My wife also suffered to raise up my son alone.
>>That time, my son was under 1 year old. My wife also suffered raising my son alone.
Finally, I finished the project.
>>Correct.
I became a person who can control software and electric.
>>I became a person who has the ability to control software and electricity.
I got high salary, but I quit the company to help my wife.
>>I got a high salary, but I quit the company to help my wife.
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