Something I must do before the year ends.
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1. First of all, before end of the year,I want to spend more time with my family.
>> First of all, before the end of the year,I want to spend more time with my family.
2. exactly, Having dinner on 31st, Dec.
>> To be exact, I want to have dinner with them on the 31st of December.
3. And I want to make the \'Bucket List\' for 2020.
>> CORRECT
OR >> And I want to make my \'Bucket List\' for 2020.
4. Also, I have to meet my old friends and go on a trip with them.
>> CORRECT
OR >>> Moreover, I have to meet my old friends and go on a trip with them.
5. One more thing, I should read some books that I bought this year.
>> CORRECT
OR>> One thing more, I should read some books that I bought this year.
6. Most important of all, keep doing my best in my work and Having a Happy Christmas!
>> The most important of all, I will keep doing my best at work and I will have a happy Christmas!
I hope you have a Merry Christmas with your family, too! ^^
Good sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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