Something I wish had never happened.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my case, I\'m afraid to be old.
Because I want to live young forever.
Time goes by, We are going to old.
I like now and I hope my family, friends and I are not going to old.
I don\'t want to pass away someone.
However, I can\'t not handle to time, I have to enjoy my life.
So, I try to my best to work, have a time with family, get along with friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Kate! ^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas by answering your homework. Keep up the good work. See you on Monday!^^
In my case, I\'m afraid to be old.
>>>In my case, I\'m afraid to get old.
Time goes by, We are going to old.
>>> The time goes by and we will get old.
I like now and I hope my family, friends and I are not going to old.
>>> I like my present life and I hope that my family and friends will not get old too.
I don\'t want to pass away someone.
>>>I don\'t want someone to pass away.
However, I can\'t not handle to time, I have to enjoy my life.
>>> However, I can\'t handle the time so I have to enjoy my life.
So, I try to my best to work, have a time with family, get along with friends.
>>> Therefore, I will try my best at work, have time with my family and get along with my friends.
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