Something surprising on a trail
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The most surprising thing that I have discovered while walking was the toilets with heaters in each one. And they are always clean and tidy whenever I use. We can use warm water when washing hands. Even though there are few people walking on the trails at night, the toilets are always bright and warm. Nowadays it is getting warm, they don\'t have heaters anymore. However, I am always thankful for warm toilets during cold season. I was surprised at the well organized welfare systems in my neighborhood.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
I really admire your government for paying so much attention to things, including recreation. As I mentioned in class, in my country, most clean public toilets are the ones we have to pay for, so the money goes to the people who maintain and clean them. It’s amazing how your government can keep public toilets clean at the same time, and for free!
- T. Caitlyn
The most surprising thing that I have discovered while walking was the toilets with heaters in each one. And they are always clean and tidy whenever I use.
>> The most surprising thing I discovered while walking was that each toilet had a heater and they are always clean and tidy whenever I use them.
We can use warm water when washing hands.
>> We can use warm water when washing our hands.
Even though there are few people walking on the trails at night, the toilets are always bright and warm.
>> CORRECT
Nowadays it is getting warm, they don\'t have heaters anymore.
>> Nowadays, since the weather is getting warmer, they don’t have heaters anymore.
However, I am always thankful for warm toilets during cold season.
>> However, I am always thankful for the warm toilets during the cold season.
I was surprised at the well-organized welfare systems in my neighborhood.
>> CORRECT
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