Something to do
학생이 쓴 원문
When I get back home, I have to study for Toiec. Also, I have to pack some stuffs because I will go to school dormitory from next semester. Maybe I need to make some To do list for it. I like to write to-do list while study.It makes me realize what I have done and what I have to do. Watching a list which I have done makes me full of accomplishment and confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hannah,
Thanks for doing your homework. I agree, a to-do list really helps!
-Teacher Ash
>> When I get back home, I have to study for the TOEIC test.
Also, I have to pack some stuffs because I will go to school dormitory from next semester.
>> Also, I have to pack some stuff because I will go to the school dormitory next semester.
Maybe I need to make some To do list for it.
>> Maybe I need to make a to-do list for it.
I like to write to-do list while study.
>> I like to write a to-do list while studying.
It makes me realize what I have done and what I have to do.
>> It allows me to track tasks that I have completed and tasks that are pending.
Watching a list which I have done makes me full of accomplishment and confidence.
>> Completing my to-do list makes me feel accomplished and makes me more confident.
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