Something to have to let go
학생이 쓴 원문
I think everyone is holding something to let go. But it is difficult to abandon these things easily. In my case, i really wanna change my personality especially interaction. If someone hurt me, i just tolerate this situation and try to maintain this useless relationship with them. I really don’t like this thing. I wanna let go my personality haha
강사 첨삭
Good day, Mark! Wow! I am amazed how fast you are in writing your sentences. I commend you for doing it. I also appreciate your honesty. There are things that we need to let go though it is hard but we need to in order to us to grow. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you, then. Take care! ~T. Lyn
I think everyone is holding something to let go.
>>Correct. Everyone seems to be holding onto something to let go.
But it is difficult to abandon these things easily.
>>Correct. But it\'s hard to just let go of these things easily.
In my case, i really wanna change my personality especially interaction.
>>In my case, I really want to change my personality, especially my interactions.
If someone hurt me, i just tolerate this situation and try to maintain this useless relationship with them.
>>If someone hurts me, I just put up with the situation and try to keep a futile relationship with him or her.
I really don’t like this thing.
>>I really don\'t like it.
I wanna let go my personality haha
>>I think, I need to let go and change this personality of mine.
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