Somethings we can\'t seek advice online.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually we look for advice in everything nowadays. But as for my relationships, I have never sought advice online. When I have some issues with my husband, I would rather receive advice from my daughters or my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree! Nowadays, seeking advice online is very convenient; however, we should also consider that not everything found online is suitable in every situation. I agree that when it comes to relationships, we should seek advice from those who know us.
- T. Caitlyn
Actually we look for advice in everything nowadays.
>> CORRECT
But as for my relationships, I have never sought advice online.
>> CORRECT
When I have some issues with my husband, I would rather receive advice from my daughters or my friends.
>> CORRECT
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