Sometimes:)
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t believe lucky charm usually.
But sometime when I wanted something strong purpose, it\'s different.
Every day I searching my lucky color and charm and something can bring it.
And dressed up lucky color clothes, take out side with my lucky charm.
But usually I don\'t care about it.
When I want something I believe.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I have the same belief with you. :)
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I don\'t believe lucky charm usually.
>> I don\'t believe in lucky charms usually.
But sometime when I wanted something strong purpose, it\'s different.
>> But sometimes, if I want something with a strong purpose, I want to believe in it.
Every day I searching my lucky color and charm and something can bring it.
>> Everyday, I search for the lucky color and charms. I sometimes bring it.
And dressed up lucky color clothes, take out side with my lucky charm.
>> I dress up using the lucky colors and take a lucky charm with me.
But usually I don\'t care about it.
>> But most of the time, I don\'t believe in it.
When I want something I believe.
>> I only do it when I want something really bad.
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