Sometimes I\'m obidient boy sometimes I\'m not.
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I think I\'m sometimes obedient boy, but sometimes I\'m not. For example, like a game, I don\'t want to stop it but my mom says \'Stop it\', then I become a not obedient boy. But easy to follow or I have to follow, then I become an obedient boy. Also, if there are some rewards or punishing, I always follow because of my personality.
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Hello, Daniel! Thank you for
answering your homework. However, you have to work more on sentence construction. Keep on practicing.
- Teacher Debbie
I think I\'m sometimes obedient boy, but sometimes I\'m not.
>> I think I\'m sometimes an obedient boy, but sometimes I\'m not.
For example, like a game, I don\'t want to stop it but my mom says \'Stop it\', then I become a not obedient boy.
>> For example, when I\'m playing a game, my mom says, \"Stop it,\" but I don\'t stop. That\'s the time I become a disobedient boy.
But easy to follow or I have to follow, then I become an obedient boy.
>> However, I become obedient when I things are easy to follow.
Also, if there are some rewards or punishing, I always follow because of my personality.
>> In addition, if there are rewards or punishments, I always obey because that\'s my personality.
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