Sometimes,, It works..

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I am so happy to read your ideas today.

Please go over the corrections below.

I want you to be careful with your tenses always and choice of words.

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Teacher Nina

Many people specially salary men are having trouble with getting angry.

>> Did you mean: Many people especially salary men are having trouble in controlling their temper.
But I think they don\'t know or they are not good at dealing with it.

>> But I think they don\'t know about it or they are not good at dealing with it.
I heard that many company manager express their anger to their subordinates.

>> Did you mean: I heard that many company managers vent out their anger to their subordinates.
That\'s why I think that way.

>> correct

Of course, I had some irratated momnets but I tried not to express my feelings.

>> Did you mean: Of course, I had some annoying situations but I tried not to express my feelings.
As a human not perfect being, I sometimes express my anger.

>> Did you mean: As a human, we are not perfect. I sometimes vent out my anger to others.

>> OR: We are just a human, we are not perfect. I also sometimes vent out my anger to others.
Sometimes it works, subordinates seemed get better.

>> There were times that it works, subordinates seemed to be better.
but I think they just tend to be. 

>> Did you mean: But I think they just tend to be good.
The real leader don\'t express his/her feelings about sad, sorry, anger.

>> The leader doesn\'t express his/ her feelings such as being sad, sorry or anger. 
He/She always cheers his/her coworker.

>> He/ She always cheers up her/ his co-worker.

The leader lead his/her people not by order but by mind.

>> The leader leads his/ her people not by the rule but by his/ her mind.
That\'s why many American people give their vote to presidnet Obama.

>> That\'s why many Americans voted President Obama.
Through him, we can see the hope of America, equality of society.

>> Through him, we can see the hope in America, equality of the society.
I want to be a person like him who can inspire many people and aspire to higher goal.

>> I want to a person like him who can inspire many people and his aspirations are high.