Somthing risky
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever tried doing something risky alone? Why did you do it?
I have never tried doing something physically risky alone.
I tend t think that safety is most important. Since I was thirty, I have been resposible for my family. So I should be healthy all the time and earn a living for my family
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I have never tried doing something physically risky alone.
>>CORRECT!
I tend t think that safety is most important.
I tend t think that safety is most important.
>>I tend to think that safety is the most important.
Since I was thirty, I have been resposible for my family.
>>CORRECT!
So I should be healthy all the time and earn a living for my family.
>>CORRECT!
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