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After I became a college student, I liked songs about giving comfort. I think I was exhausted. So I wanted taking a rest. For example I loved lylics like "Please don't give up, If I can measure for your sadness, I would lift a burden from you" and "Thanks for your hard work even though no one interested in your effort." Sometimes when I heard news about irrationalities of the society, I listened songs like hiphop and rock. Almost lyrics is about disobey and rage. For example, "Why are you looking at me like that, Did I'm wrong? Please leave me alone, Please don't judge me by your standards." and "I tried to understand, but there are people I couldn't understand. They who were selfish people look like crazy." From middle of last year, I often went to the concert. It was different from listening music by machine. After this composition, I become having a interests about translation of lyrics. Although I can't translate faithfull translations, it is fun.

Hi!! Thank you for sending me your composition. I hope your using the corrections as your guide.Take care always. Teacher Chloe After I became a college student, I liked songs about giving comfort. >>After I become a college student, I liked songs about giving comfort. I think I was exhausted. >>Correct So I wanted taking a rest. >>So I want to take a rest. For example I loved lylics like \"Please don\'t give up, If I can measure for your sadness, I would lift a burden from you\" and \"Thanks for your hard work even though no one interested in your effort.\" >>CorrectSometimes when I heard news about irrationalities of the society, I listened songs like hiphop and rock. >>Sometimes when I heard news about irrationalities of the society, I listen to songs like hiphop and rock. Almost lyrics is about disobey and rage. >>Most lyrics are about disobedience and rage. For example, \"Why are you looking at me like that, Did I\'m wrong? Please leave me alone, Please don\'t judge me by your standards.\" and \"I tried to understand, but there are people I couldn\'t understand. >>For example, \"Why are you looking at me like that, Did I did something wrong? Please leave me alone. Please don\'t judgeme by your standards.\" and \"I tried to understand, but there are people I couldn\'t understand. They who were selfish people look like crazy.\" >>Those are selfish people, they are crazy.From middle of last year, I often went to the concert. >>From last year, I often go to concerts. It was different from listening music by machine. >>It was different from listening music from teh radio.After this composition, I become having a interests about translation of lyrics. >>After this composition, I started having interests about translating lyrics. Although I can\'t translate faithfull translations, it is fun. >>Eventhough, I can\'t translate all of them, it is fun.