song represents me
학생이 쓴 원문
i guess.. there is a song called bangbangbang which composed by g-dragon. and i think it truly represents my attitude perfectly. there are few reasons. start with, whenever i listen to it, i just feel so excited. i mean it\'s highly amazing. i don\'t know why, but people around me often talk to me that i am an outgoing person. therefore i think i can say that bangbangbang can represent me. additionally, i am really into that music.
i listen to it almost everyday of the year for real. what i am trying to say is that it is one of my favorite songs since its vibe is just so energetic. i think it is enough for this question. i know that it has no relation with the question you asked, but if you haven\'t listened to it i extremely want to recommend it to you.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gilbert!
Thank you for doing your homework. Great job expressing the song that you think represents you best. Just take note of the sentence structure to improve the clarity of your ideas. Try to practice these sentences, and may they serve as a guide for you to answer questions like this.
- T. Caitlyn
i guess.. there is a song called bangbangbang which composed by g-dragon. and i think it truly represents my attitude perfectly.
>> I guess there is a song called \'Bang Bang Bang\' composed by G-Dragon, and I think it truly represents my attitude perfectly.
there are few reasons.
>> There are a few reasons.
start with, whenever i listen to it, i just feel so excited.
>> To start with, whenever I listen to it, I just feel so excited.
I mean it\'s highly amazing.
>> CORRECT
i don\'t know why, but people around me often talk to me that i am an outgoing person.
>> I don\'t know why, but people around me often tell me that I am an outgoing person.
therefore i think i can say that bangbangbang can represent me.
>> Therefore, I think I can say that \'Bang Bang Bang\' represents me.
additionally, i am really into that music.
>> Additionally, I am really into that song.
i listen to it almost every day of the year, for real.
i listen to it almost every day of the year, for real.
>> CORRECT
what i am trying to say is that it is one of my favorite songs since its vibe is just so energetic.
>> What I’m trying to say is that it is one of my favorite songs because its vibe is just so energetic.
i think it is enough for this question.
>> I think that’s enough for this question.
i know that it has no relation with the question you asked, but if you haven\'t listened to it i extremely want to recommend it to you.
>> I know it’s not related to the question you asked, but if you haven’t listened to it, I highly recommend it.
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