Sorry :(

2012-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm so sorry for ignoring your phone call. My phone placed on the desk where had some distances from my bed. So I couldn't hear your call. Additionally, I forgot to set up alarming. So my phone didn't get off early in the morning. Before I slept, I was ready for words that I told you my weekend. But after I woke up, all burned out of my memory. Anyway I didn't take a class today. But I slept about for 6 hours deeply. But I'm still sleepy. Sombody helps me out~ Now I have to study. See you tomorrow moring, Nica. Have a happy day! Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!^^ I was thinking that you were still asleep when I called you. Hehehe. Anyway, thank you for your composition today. You did a great job in putting your thoughts into this composition. I\'m looking forward to talking to you tomorrow and listening to your stories. Have a great day. Take care!^^ T. Nica ^^ I\'m so sorry for ignoring your phone call.>> Correct!My phone placed on the desk where had some distances from my bed. >> My phone was placed on the desk which is quite far from my bed. So I couldn\'t hear your call. >> Correct! Additionally, I forgot to set up alarming. >> In addition, I forgot t o set up the alarm. So my phone didn\'t get off early in the morning. >> So my phone didn\'t alarm in the morning.Before I slept, I was ready for words that I told you my weekend. >> Before I slept I was already for words to tell you about my weekend. But after I woke up, all burned out of my memory.>> But after I woke up, it all burned out of my memory.Anyway I didn\'t take a class today. >> Anyway, I didn\'t took a class tod ay. But I slept about for 6 hours deeply. >> But I slept deeply for 6 hours. But I\'m still sleepy. >> Correct! Sombody helps me out~>> Somebody help me out.Now I have to study. >> Correct! See you tomorrow moring, Nica. >> Correct! Have a happy day!  >> Correct! Bye~ >> Correct!

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