Sorry :(
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm so sorry for ignoring your phone call.
My phone placed on the desk where had some distances from my bed. So I couldn't hear your call. Additionally, I forgot to set up alarming. So my phone didn't get off early in the morning.
Before I slept, I was ready for words that I told you my weekend. But after I woke up, all burned out of my memory.
Anyway I didn't take a class today. But I slept about for 6 hours deeply. But I'm still sleepy. Sombody helps me out~
Now I have to study. See you tomorrow moring, Nica. Have a happy day! Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
I was thinking that you were still asleep when I called you. Hehehe. Anyway, thank you for your composition today. You did a great job in putting your thoughts into this composition. I\'m looking forward to talking to you tomorrow and listening to your stories. Have a great day. Take care!^^
T. Nica ^^
I\'m so sorry for ignoring your phone call.>> Correct!My phone placed on the desk where had some distances from my bed.
>> My phone was placed on the desk which is quite far from my bed.
So I couldn\'t hear your call.
>> Correct!
Additionally, I forgot to set up alarming.
>> In addition, I forgot t o set up the alarm.
So my phone didn\'t get off early in the morning.
>> So my phone didn\'t alarm in the morning.Before I slept, I was ready for words that I told you my weekend.
>> Before I slept I was already for words to tell you about my weekend.
But after I woke up, all burned out of my memory.>> But after I woke up, it all burned out of my memory.Anyway I didn\'t take a class today.
>> Anyway, I didn\'t took a class tod ay.
But I slept about for 6 hours deeply.
>> But I slept deeply for 6 hours.
But I\'m still sleepy.
>> Correct!
Sombody helps me out~>> Somebody help me out.Now I have to study.
>> Correct!
See you tomorrow moring, Nica.
>> Correct!
Have a happy day!
>> Correct!
Bye~
>> Correct!
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